Muriwai’s Writing Learning Story

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Muriwai’s Writing Learning Story


We have been writing personal profiles.
In my personal profile, I tried to hook the readers
in by using my hook and make the readers work something out
for e.g, I told the readers my name and told them I was going to tell
them about myself.
I was good at sharing information about myself in an interesting way for e.g my family and what I was good at. Also, I told the reader that I wanted to be a
animal instead of a human
I used paragraphs in my writing to make it clearer and easier for
the readers to read it.
The next steps I want to use another way of making the reader
want to read more, like putting in anecdotes or examples, and
carefully choosing language to create a picture for the reader.
Also, I need to write really interesting hooks to hook my readers
and use clever dialogue.
My personal profile is about what I'm good at, what I like to do
and where I'm from.
I am good at writing stories and about myself, I can use long
and interesting words. When I was writing this personal profile
I made it big so the reader would learn lots about me.

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